short stories

Cruisin’ for a Bruisin’

Here's a short story to help brighten up the mood after my last - very negative - post. (Sorry if that was a bit of a downer for your Wednesday night...) In my opinion, this story started off well and I'm proud of the first few paragraphs, but the ending is a little wayward. And so is the title. But enjoy it anyway. I'd love to hear your feedback in the comments. 🙂