I wrote this poem a few weeks ago and I was surprised at how it turned out. It’s not amazing – poem’s are not my strong point – but I had fun putting it together 🙂
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Here it is:
I wonder if there’s such a big difference
between just you and me.
Is it the fact that our complex minds
work so differently?
My heart is guarded by a wall of bricks
more than ten feet tall,
but I wonder, if that wall wasn’t there,
would you care for me at all?
We sit with our backs against that wall
living within our daydreams.
However, we don’t often stop to think
that nothing is as it seems.
One day, when I find the courage
to knock that brick wall down,
you might be waiting on the other side,
saying “hey, what took so long?”
Maybe then we’ll go for a walk,
and you’ll admire the moon,
but little will you know, while you’re looking at it,
I’ll be looking at you.
I hope you liked it 🙂